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This isn't my usual haiku instead I've decided to progress to Tanka (which is the oldest form of japanese poetry )
The 1st and 3rd line are five syllables whilst the others have a seven syllable count. This took me much longer than my usual works to complete (ahem 4-5 hours including the editing).
Stocks are from:
- [link]
- [link]
- [link]
and yes the original title name and idea progressed from the hunger games though this is my own work and nothing to do with it other than for inspiriational matters so no it isn't fan art
hope you guys like it
All critiques would be welcome and appreciated as I would like to know how I should improve and the good points of the work I do saying that I would prefer constructive critism on my tanka and not the visual side of my work, afterall, I am not an editor (and I know my limitations as one) but I do want to improve on my writing
P.s. please do not copy or redistribute without my permission, thank you
The 1st and 3rd line are five syllables whilst the others have a seven syllable count. This took me much longer than my usual works to complete (ahem 4-5 hours including the editing).
Stocks are from:
- [link]
- [link]
- [link]
and yes the original title name and idea progressed from the hunger games though this is my own work and nothing to do with it other than for inspiriational matters so no it isn't fan art
hope you guys like it
All critiques would be welcome and appreciated as I would like to know how I should improve and the good points of the work I do saying that I would prefer constructive critism on my tanka and not the visual side of my work, afterall, I am not an editor (and I know my limitations as one) but I do want to improve on my writing
P.s. please do not copy or redistribute without my permission, thank you
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