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The Hanging Tree.

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This isn't my usual haiku :P instead I've decided to progress to Tanka (which is the oldest form of japanese poetry ;) )

The 1st and 3rd line are five syllables whilst the others have a seven syllable count. This took me much longer than my usual works to complete (ahem 4-5 hours including the editing).

Stocks are from:
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and yes the original title name and idea progressed from the hunger games though this is my own work and nothing to do with it other than for inspiriational matters :) so no it isn't fan art :D

hope you guys like it :squee:
All critiques would be welcome and appreciated as I would like to know how I should improve and the good points of the work I do :) saying that I would prefer constructive critism on my tanka and not the visual side of my work, afterall, I am not an editor (and I know my limitations as one) but I do want to improve on my writing :D

P.s. please do not copy or redistribute without my permission, thank you :heart:
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