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Prejudice and Pride. by thewritingthimble Prejudice and Pride. by thewritingthimble
So I reckon my editing has improved drastically lately :D so much so that I can say that I'm actually proud of the editing that I have done hehe ^^

So here we go, another haiku 5,7,5 structured poem
with an edited image :D

I hope you like :meow:

PLEASE DON'T COPY OR REDISTRIBUTE MY WORK WITHOUT PERMISSION THOUGH :heart:

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:iconpumpkinqueen-3090:
PumpkinQueen-3090 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Student General Artist
My god , she's beautiful. She realy looks like Emilie Autumn in my point of view.
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
hehe thanks ^___^
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:iconpumpkinqueen-3090:
PumpkinQueen-3090 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student General Artist
welcome
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:icondude-im-alive:
dude-im-alive Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012   Writer
was about to scroll down to read the poem then counted the syllables in that bottom right bit and was like - aaah a haiku! It's very nice, I like it (:
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
hehe thank you!! :glomp:

I'm happy that you like it :D
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:icondude-im-alive:
dude-im-alive Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012   Writer
So am I :D
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xxHarmoniousChaosxx Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Professional Writer
Love this...
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
I'm glad that you like it :)
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:iconsilvervulpine:
SilverVulpine Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous work! :)
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Thank you very much :heart:
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:iconsilvervulpine:
SilverVulpine Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome. :)
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ArtistofFewTalents Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
The red hair stands out and I like the font. My favorite part of the haiku is the "Utter vanity". It sounds really nice.
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
Thank you :)
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:iconlummutis:
Lummutis Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student Writer
O.o
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
*arches eyebrow

put your eyes back into your skull boyo ;D :heart:


....after that, go make me a sandwich :P hehe ^_^
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner May 5, 2012
I've been learning how to like haikus. Yours contributes to that. As the previous comments says, the words fit the image perfectly.

Really nice!
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 5, 2012
hank you very much :) I'm happy that it's contributed to the improval of your opinion of the form of poetry ;)
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
This is good. I don't usually like poetry that relies to heavily on an actual image, but this I like. The words just fit the image so well. Congrats on a good piece of work.
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 4, 2012
Thank you :D I'm happy that you like it! ^_^
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:iconeclecticquill:
EclecticQuill Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
No worries :)
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TsukikoCyberGoth Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student General Artist
pure beauty.
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Thank you :)
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:iconastridpurins:
AstridPurins Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love it. I just... wow! (: x
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
hehe ^_^ yay! x
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foto-ragazza14 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
Wonderful job!! :clap:
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
thanks :meow:
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:iconabbycatwolff:
AbbyCatWolff Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Ah! This is wonderful! I love your poems!
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
hehe thanks! :D
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:iconzmb216:
Zmb216 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
Love the haiku, and the background image is perfect. Such a beautiful woman for a beautiful poem.
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Aw thanks :) I'm glad you approve of it ^_^
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:icondxt85:
Dxt85 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
Great work! Gorgeous
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Thanks :)
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:icondxt85:
Dxt85 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012
Welcome!
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:iconthisisliss:
thisisliss Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012   General Artist
Gorgeous.
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thewritingthimble Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
Thank you !! ^^
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:iconthisisliss:
thisisliss Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012   General Artist
np :D
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