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Black bird of grace,
followed by darkless faith,
absorb the light of the silver moon,
to light the cockels of your soul,
let your eyes become a beacon,
to show the world your glittering aura,
and prove to all,
that dark wings can conceal
even the most admirable being.

Black bird of grace,
you've shown them all,
you brim with loyalty, love and life,
you have succeeded in what they cannot,
now you can continue to let your heart fly,
protected in your canopy of lightless wings,
but continue to shine through those bright eyes.

Black bird of grace,
I plea to you,
help my sparrow to hide in night,
help him to escape this earth bound nightmare,
whilst restoring his own shattered spirit,
for you are the best in him.

Show him how to fly above those confined by trees,
and how to escape his unfathomable memories,
so help this sparrow,
to stretch out his broken wings,
and learn once more to fly.
:iconthewritingthimble:
Free Verse poem, please don't copy. thanks.

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*The-Lost-Hope Oct 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow this is lovely. I don't know all the technical terms for poems, but I like how you made it with sysbolism and it is well written. :)
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:iconthewritingthimble:
thank you :') I'm glad that you like it! :hug:
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:iconthe-lost-hope:
*The-Lost-Hope Oct 10, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome! :D
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:icontdgforever:
i love the imagery and sybolism in this. nice :)
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~xFalathiel Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this... the imagery it paints in your mind is wonderful too. I would love to see a big black bird teaching a little sparrow in real life!
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:iconthewritingthimble:
hehe ^^ I'm glad that you like it!

And seeing that in reality would be pretty cool :meow:
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~Zireael07 Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Is this about a raven?
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:iconthewritingthimble:
I actually have no idea :O

....lol....... if you want it to be it can be hehe ^^
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